Positions through Essaying: Process & Written Response

Week 1:

>>rough story board and video timeline

Feedbacks received from tutorial:

  • explain more about the process of how each coding sketch was built
    • show the input & output
    • what I learned from exploring the different code sketches
    • explain more on how I developed control over the tool/programme
  • Reword the line of enquiry –> too broad now
    • connect it more to the chosen reference
  • Explain the system of the typeface
    • how it relates to the randomness in p5js & the design process
  • Maybe link back to p5js at the end?
  • talk more on why I chose this specific architecture
    • try to find a more personal research question
  • Articulate the process & the question in more depth

Week 1:

Video Essay link: https://vimeo.com/1089049671?share=copy

Voice Over Script: