Symposium presentation initial sequence:
Feedbacks:
- line of enquiry needs to be stated clearly in the intro
- general aim –> different demonstrations
- “unsmoothing” is the response to the concern of this project
Symposium slides – Draft 1:
Feedbacks:
- the presentation is focused too much on the references –> my studio work need to be more emphasized
- how the use of the medium deepened my enquiry? (what/why/how)
- scale down on the theoretical parts
- provide definition of “smoothing” and the process
Symposium slides – Draft 2:
Feedbacks:
- break the sections in more slides
- explain the dancheong typeface in more detail
- display the key terms/definitions on the slide
- “smoothing” –> find different examples of map smoothing
- transit map
- territory labeling in maps?
- also briefly talk about what are the benefits of “smoothing”
- end with images of my own practice
- put the sequence in the order of: reference –> my studio work –> reference –> my studio work
Symposium slides – Final: